There was a mermaid And she had the best family.  One day she went to the Sand. People on the beach she Had You had no idea Who those people are.  She Said she was terrified. She had no idea Who's the people are So She's my back to a family.  And she told her family They are human on The land.
  What I enjoyed most was……..because…………..

The thing/part I found most challenging was………..because……….

What I might do differently next time is……...because…………….